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dried flowers by ~tears-for-christ:icontears-for-christ:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Fixed


Dried flowers pressed between yellowed pages
Fragile from time and age,
Time has not been kind
Three long years have passed now,
Tears have stained the pages,
Of a story never told or read
Just a home for memories…
Staring long and hard
Hoping to bring you back
Or just to catch a glimpse of you
The red roses seem so black now
And the baby’s breath has long ceased to breathe
Fingers caress the petals and brush against the page,
Stirring up dust and memories that rise from the pages
The little nothings that meant so much,
Your dried flowers pressed between yellowed pages.
©2006-2009 ~tears-for-christ
:icontears-for-christ:

Author's Comments

.... not much to say about this one just that it sad... and depressing... u get what you want out of it leave me some love and let me know what ya think

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~susanm1981 Sep 11, 2006, 4:31:19 AM
It is very sad... but you seem to be a bit like me when it comes to writing poetry... sadness is the motivator. I like how you utilize imagery in this, very good.

:hug:

:glomp:

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♂ + ♂ = ♥
♀ + ♀ = ♥
♀ + ♂ = ♥
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~shadowzerro Sep 11, 2006, 10:32:32 PM
Hey that is not that sad to me but depressing it is. I'm tierd of dueling on the past and I just focus on moveing on.

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I AM THE FRONTLINE OF SHADOWZERRO. GOD THE FATHER, JESUS THE SON, AND THE HOLY SPIRIT LOVE YOU AS MUTCH AS I DO!
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~bluefiretears Sep 12, 2006, 2:46:20 PM
This is terribly sad. :( So well written though, i fell in love with it. Because i can deffinetly feel how even a simple dried flower can bring on the most extensive memories.

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"Beyond the door theres peace Im sure
And I know therell be no more tears in heaven..."
-Eric Clapton
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Mood: Sorrow ~tears-for-christ Sep 13, 2006, 8:44:01 AM
thank you so much and yes they can be so heart breaking.

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Staring into the intersection
she thinks that she can fly and she might
holding on in a new direction
she's gonna try it tonight
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Mood: Sorrow ~tears-for-christ Sep 13, 2006, 8:44:03 AM
thank you so much and yes they can be so heart breaking.

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Staring into the intersection
she thinks that she can fly and she might
holding on in a new direction
she's gonna try it tonight
:icontears-for-christ:
~tears-for-christ Sep 13, 2006, 8:53:24 AM
yeah... it was sad for me but i was selected for a workshop...

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Staring into the intersection
she thinks that she can fly and she might
holding on in a new direction
she's gonna try it tonight
:icontears-for-christ:
~tears-for-christ Sep 13, 2006, 8:54:56 AM
aww thank you. that is so sweet... and yes depression and sorrow are great motivatiors.

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Staring into the intersection
she thinks that she can fly and she might
holding on in a new direction
she's gonna try it tonight
:iconshadowzerro:
~shadowzerro Sep 13, 2006, 10:42:19 AM
For a workshop? What do you meen?

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I AM THE FRONTLINE OF SHADOWZERRO. GOD THE FATHER, JESUS THE SON, AND THE HOLY SPIRIT LOVE YOU AS MUTCH AS I DO!
:icontears-for-christ:
~tears-for-christ Sep 14, 2006, 10:50:47 AM
it is when poems are selected for constructive critasium and they will tell you what they like what they don't like and how you can make it better. i am excited about it.... mine was picked yay.

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Staring into the intersection
she thinks that she can fly and she might
holding on in a new direction
she's gonna try it tonight
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