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Please let me go by ~tears-for-christ:icontears-for-christ:

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Bars are cold and depression is dark
Fighting to be free. Hidden behind silent lies
Begging to be me

Legs are chained and hands are bound
So afraid to fall or cry
Spread my broken wings
Justin I close my eyes and dream of better things

Listen to how a broken heart sings
Justin close your eyes
let me spread my severed wings

So afraid of letting go
Drowning in your tears
Such a pretty little bird
Imprisoned by my fears

so afraid of letting go
my lonely broken wings
Justin please just close your eyes
I dream of better things

It’s too hard to breathe
So little faith please believe
Justin if you love me so
The best thing to do is to let me go

Justin please why can’t you see
That angels  need to fly
Justin please just set me free
before I slowly die
©2006-2009 ~tears-for-christ
:icontears-for-christ:

Author's Comments

he is strangling me i need to get away before i can' t take anymore. i am almost at the end of my rope and at the end of its a noose.

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~Mikha May 25, 2006, 9:43:58 AM
T______T that is so beautiful!!

Hope you get to be free soon. If it's destroying you, there is no point in keeping it up.

:hug:

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Ay! Si los vivos supieran lo inutil que es estar muerto!

"El que ama no cansa, ni se cansa"
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~tears-for-christ May 25, 2006, 9:52:33 AM
thank you so much yes i hope i am free too. he keeps pulling me in. every time i try to break free. if he doesn't let me go i am going to excape. can't take much more. i shouldn't have to.

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Staring into the intersection
she thinks that she can fly and she might
holding on in a new direction
she's gonna try it tonight
:icontears-for-christ:
~tears-for-christ May 25, 2006, 9:53:14 AM
ps.. sorry i didn't send this before but thank you for the favorite it is much appreciated.

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Staring into the intersection
she thinks that she can fly and she might
holding on in a new direction
she's gonna try it tonight
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~notacamouflagesoul May 25, 2006, 7:30:58 PM
in reading your recent writing (much of which is really good, all of which is heart-wrenching), it's clear that you're going through a really rough time... i'll be praying for you... thanks for being willing to share your heart on da

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"I look beyond the empty cross, forgetting what my life has cost, and wipe away the crimson stains and dull the nails that still remain; More and more I need you now, I owe you more each passing hour, the battle between grace and pride I gave up not so lo
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~Mikha May 26, 2006, 6:53:22 AM
No, you shouldn't.

Speak straight to him, let him know :)

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Ay! Si los vivos supieran lo inutil que es estar muerto!

"El que ama no cansa, ni se cansa"
:iconmikha:
~Mikha May 26, 2006, 6:54:05 AM
you're welcome :)!

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Ay! Si los vivos supieran lo inutil que es estar muerto!

"El que ama no cansa, ni se cansa"
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~patientlove004 May 27, 2006, 8:37:38 PM
wow...very nice poetry...but if he is hurting you this bad u don't need this. There is someone out there who is far far better than that. You don't need this. And it will be hard at first but God will get you through it if you trust him.

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::All of us have creativity in ourselves, we just have to find it:: ~Me
~PoeticPath =christians ~da-library
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~tears-for-christ May 29, 2006, 7:29:41 AM
thanks the problem is i trusted justin and he betrayed it. i need to remeber that god would not put me with someone who is going to hurt me like this and what doen't break us makes us stronger.

--
Staring into the intersection
she thinks that she can fly and she might
holding on in a new direction
she's gonna try it tonight
:icontears-for-christ:
~tears-for-christ May 29, 2006, 7:37:43 AM
every time i call he doesn't have time to talk and he is too busy with his friends getting stoned that doesn't leave much time for me. even though all i do is make time for him. i can't talk to him every time i try he isn't listenig.

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Staring into the intersection
she thinks that she can fly and she might
holding on in a new direction
she's gonna try it tonight
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